Monday, March 26, 2012

My Pirate story

Arr, my name is Captian 100 and were sailing on our huge ship for an adventure. Our ship is called the Good Pirates. Can you guess what were searching for? Arr treasure. We lost six of our strongest pirates when we were in a storm last night. The waves were so strong that we almost crashed into the rocks. Now we only have four of our strongest pirate.

Pirate look out shouts, "ARR WE HAVE COPMANY, THE ANGRY PIRATES ARE HERE". We all get ready for the fight. "FIRE THE BOMBS," I yell. We fire the bombs and they hit the Angry Pirates ship in a big CRASH. The boat almost tipped over. They sail away with a grumpy face. "I'LL GET YOU AND YOUR CREW NEXT TIME" Captain Angry face say's. The End

1 comment:

  1. Hey Quziyah,

    I really enjoyed reading your fantastic writing.
    I hope next time you can proof read.
    By the way that was fantastic.

    KEEP IT UP!!

    Sincerely Love Asena!


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