Guess what I did in the weekends? I went to the movies at Sylvia Park.
In
the weekend I went to the movies. When I was making my way to the
movies I saw a lot of people as I look down. Going past shops with stuff
in it. Me peeking to see what kind of things I want.
When
I walked through the automatic doors, I got greeted by the yummy smell
of popcorn and people. I went to go see Step up 4 and it was amazing. As
soon as I walked into the movie theater the movie starting.
I
watched it until the end. When the movie ended I was the first person
out. My favorite part was when they danced on the cars. I sure that was
everyone's favorite part too. When it was getting late it was time to
go home, have a feed and go to sleep.
Hello Quziyah
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Hi Quziyah,
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Hi Quziyah,
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