Monday, February 11, 2013


POOF! WOW! I’ve always wanted to see what it was like in my brain. As a memory started to come towards me I ducked as fast as I could and looked back. Hey, I remember that time when I was born. Woooh! Is that what I really looked like? Look thats the time I met Ana and thats the time I went to the beach. Thats what I should do, go to the beach. I think its time for me to go now. POOF! As I came out of my brain it was Saturday already.

I called Ana and my other friend Annliz. I said to them “Hey, its me Quziyah. Do you girls wanna go to mission bay today?” At the same time both of my friends shouted “YES!” “Ok, see you there bye.” “Bye.” I hung up and packed my togs, a towel, a brush and sunscreen into my school bag. I got $30 out of my piggy bank and took the bus to Mission bay.

As I traveled there on the bus I saw a lot of people walking back home from the beach and people walking to the beach. I got off the bus and and saw Ana waving to me across the road. I used the crossing to cross to Ana. Annliz arrived on the bus to and she used the crossing. We all ran to the sand and dropped our bags. We walked to the changing rooms and got changed into our togs. Then ran to the water. We started splashing the water into each others faces. A stranger yelled “SHARK!” Everybody ran out of the water and took the bus home.

Me and the girls stayed at the beach and walked across the road. We went to Mcdonalds and had some food. As the sky started to get dark we bused back to Glen Innes. Into my room I went and snuggled into my bed. Just as I knew it the day ended.


  1. Hey Quziyah,
    Reading your writing was really long and interesting.
    Can't wait to see your next blog post.
    Keep up the awesome work Quziyah!

  2. Hi Quziyah I like your wirtting I liked how you ended it keep up the cool work

  3. hi quziyah I like wirtting I like your end of your wirtting . Your picture that coconut tree I like it it is cool.

  4. Hi Quziyah,
    That was a great story about the beach Quziyah. Keep it up I cant wan't for your next post Quziyah. I really did like you post.


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