Monday, June 25, 2012

Terrifying snake.

It was dark time and all you could see was pitch black. We heard noises in the basement, so we went down to see what it was. The light was still on but all of a sudden it just switched off. Something brushed up against Raeleen’s foot and her surprise turned to horror as she looked down and saw a big ugly scary snake.

Raeleen ran as fast as she could but unfortunately it wasn’t fast enough. It caught her and tied its body around her body. It squashed all Raeleen’s bones and ate her all up. I ran away as fast as I could and just in time I got away from the snake. It was really big and ugly, so that became my most terrifying day. As the days went past I couldn’t stop thinking about that one most scary day.

I went to go talk to my friend Asena. I saw her shopping in the mall. I shouted “Asena, I have to talk to you.” She stopped and said “Hi Quziyah, how are you today?” I replied “Terrified of course!” So I explained to her about that dark scary night and so it went on. Then it was the end. She didn’t believe me so I told her that it was just a made up story.

I tripped up and bangged my head into a pole. I got up with a little help from Asena. I forgot all about that night and just started shopping with Asena at the mall and so from that day on, I never had to worry about that Terrifying snake any more.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Quziyah!
    Whoa that was an awesome story, i loved the bit when you said "I tripped up and bangged my head into a pole" that was really funny! I wonder did is raeleen dead? Well I'll be waiting for your next post! :)

    from Mya


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